AuthorI am a student at Davie County High School doing a project for Mr. Barker. I loved learning Greek Mythology in school which inspired this. Archives
December 2021
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Week 10: Third Story?11/28/2021 What Did I Do?This week i worked more on my second short story and fixed the mistakes. I am almost done with it and I like this story and I am kinda proud of myself. I have gotten more advice on it which has helped me more with making it interesting. I have also learned from the advice that I have really bad grammar. I knew this but hearing it made me realize how bad i was. I now have a friend check over every sentence to look for grammar mistakes. The Third StorySo now the final being two weeks away I am thinking that I may be able to make a short third story and I have an idea for it and I will post it later because it has a twist. It may not happen so don't be mad.
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Week 9: Working11/21/2021 FixingThis week I worked more on my second short story and looked over it. I also looked back on my first short story and went through and made sure the simple mistakes were taken care of, like grammar, and that it made sense. I also talked with some peers to get their opinion and advice on it and i was able to gain some feedback and fix what needed to be fixed. I was also given some feedback on what I had so far on my second story. I fixed minor details in that and then thought about time to see if I would be able to make a third story. I think it is possible but I will have to make sure I work efficiently and make time for it. What to Do NextFor week ten I plan on working more on my story and if I have time then I will be working on a third story and make sure the second story is good and look over it.
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Week 8: Second Story11/14/2021 What I Have DoneThis week I have worked on the second story which is called "The Almost Flood". I was able to get some help from peers and got advice about it and corrections on little stuff like grammar. I have also been given suggestions on what to do and what will be interesting. I wrote down the suggestions and what other people have said to have them has ideas or things to do. For example, people have asked me about the monsters or creatures that will be mentioned in the story which I haven't really thought much of but now I have been able to think about it more. What to Do Next
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Week 7: Organizing11/7/2021 What Have I done?This week I have done some organizing and wrote things done for planning and to make things go more smoothly. I have also started to plan my second story which will be revolved around Mizu. I have also started to work on it a little and have got some suggestions an advice. I am hoping to make good progress on the story and make it enjoyable and keep it a good story and i plan on getting help and advice from others so the story can be better.
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